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Golems

Golems are a broad type of semiartificial life. They are living beings who gain life when a spirit enters a body granted the ability to move by magic or spiritual infusion. Golems are mostly made of inorganic materials. Locomotion, speech, and the senses are typically achieved by magic, but sophisticated golem designs will also include these features on the physical level. Golems, as magical life, have a natural affinity for magic. Many also have strong spiritual connections and can use spirit/necromantic magic.

The rituals, bodies, and methods used to create golems are diverse. Most are not created to be living at all. Instead, some wandering spirit decides to inhabit the golem body, which has already been designed to be capable of sustaining a spirit. Indeed, a body couldn’t be sufficiently complex to make a lifeless golem unless it is also sufficiently sophisticated to host a spirit. The natural abundance of spirits means that most golems are living, while lifeless golems, called machine golems, are rare.

When a spirit inhabits a golem body, it is functionally equivalent to birth: the spirit forgets its life from before and becomes a soul, bound to the body until the body’s destruction. On death, like other spirits, the spirit will then regain its original memories, without losing its memories of life. What constitutes a golem’s destruction varies according to its construction, but severing the magic tied to the body is always sufficient–the spirit is never trapped in a body reduced to a statue.

Golems experience mental growth and childhood like any other species. Young golems are infantile in their understanding and gradually learn how to make use of their mind, senses, and understanding. Only communal golems have the luxury of physical maturation, that is, having a body that matches their cognitive development. Golems with advanced bodies or magic may have a lot of knowledge or instincts at birth, but will struggle with being born into powerful bodies without having any experience or maturity. Most magic, including that used by primitive golem builders, grants basic language comprehension on birth, since golem builders desire a golem that can follow orders. This process makes golems specially vulnerable to psychological disorders tied to slavery.

Variants

Prole

Other names: Worker, Clay, Common. Prole golems are your iconic golem, designed for brute labor. They serve as heavy laborers, soldiers, guards, and the like. They are the simplest subspecies and civilizations will typically build prole golems before anything else. In consequence, prole golems are the most common subspecies by far. They are rarely built with the capacity to speak–most primitive golem builders do not even realize this is a possibility. Taking these factors together, prole golems are the source of most prejudices against golems, especially the belief that they are soulless, mute, or devoid of intelligence. It should be emphasized that prole golems are none of these, and furthermore, can be quite erudite, wealthy, free, etc. if allowed to develop on their own terms.

Vanitas

Vanitas golems are any golem designed to fulfill some vanity of the creator: the pursuit of beauty, the replacement of a loved one, an artificial child, an attempt at immortality, and so on. Vanitas golems tend to be one-of-a-kind, with physiologies tailored to their purpose. They may or may not resemble the species of their creator. Most vanitas golems are enslaved and many have particularly tortured psychologies, stemming from the peculiar pressures and demands of their creators. Their name comes from the art genre of the same name. Many mythological golems, like Galatea and Pinocchio, would be vanitas golems.

Domestic

Other names: Noble, Service. Domestic golems are the softer equivalent of prole golems. They are designed for domestic labor. For example, a wizard might have prole golems build a tower and then have domestic golems cook and clean. Domestic golems are more likely to be able to speak, especially if they are assigned tasks like cooking or care. Cleaning, light gathering, and light maintenance are the most common tasks. Some domestic golems are even educated as magi, healers, doctors, or other complex roles, but this is rare since few civilizations reach this level of sophisticated golem design and still enslave golems. The creation of domestic golems corresponds to more advanced golem building societies–the precision required to build hands that can handle a broom or even a scalpel are much more complicated than clubs or unwieldy fists. The magic required to subjugate a domestic golem also tends to be more sophisticated, since they can speak and perform more complicated tasks. This magic might feature speech control (e.g., speak only when spoken to or clarifying questions only), physical limits (e.g., do not leave this building), and emotional manipulation (e.g., rage suppression). Domestic golems will often undergo training and education before sale too, meaning golem builders typically instill attitudes of submission (whether they realize the golem is intelligent or not). Oftentimes, golem builders will emplace magic subjugation so severe even before implementing speech that the golem builders do not realize that the golems are intelligent. Other, unscrupulous golem builders will refine their magic to disguise the fact the golems are intelligent to a concerned buyer. Consider the substantial and justified concern about AI in our nonmagical society: developing sophisticated and speaking golems invokes comparable controversies.

Imitation

Other names: Rogue, Impostor, Changeling. Imitation golems are those golems trying to fit into some other civilization, often adopting a physical appearance that is difficult to distinguish from whatever other species they live amongst. This is often to avoid reenslavement or prejudice, but some golems do simply adopt the aesthetics of surrounding species. Imitation golems are often also vanitas or domestic golems, especially if they are still enslaved. Note, however, that imitation golems have nothing to do with actual changelings and can only change at great expense (in terms of material and alteration to their magical enchantment).

Communal

Other names: Heritage, Free. Communal golems are golems born into a society of golems or one who has had time to reshape itself as part of such a society. Free of the pressures of other species, communal golems can vary wildly. Some have bizarre forms, others have highly functional bodies, and others still follow whatever sense of aesthetics their community develops.

Machine

Other names: Animal, algorithmic, husk (perjorative). A golem that genuinely does not possess a soul is a machine golem. Unlike living golems, machine golems operate on purely magical principles to understand speech and take orders. Other golems can naturally and intuitively distinguish whether a golem possesses a soul, but it is much more difficult for other species. Machine golems are surprisingly rare: the natural and magical processes and rituals used to construct golems make suitable vessels for souls. Many listless souls inhabit golem bodies as a matter of instinct or curiosity. Machine golems tend to degrade and collapse faster than other golems, plus they are prone to errors, rages, and obtuseness because they are magical machines instead of creatures that can genuinely understand language. Primitive golem builders and users tend to believe machine golems are simply defective, accelerating the destruction of machine golems and increasing the enslavement of other golems. While all golems technically begin as machine golems, many golem bodies spend only moments as machine golems. After all, places where people converge and build golems tend to be places where spirits also converge. Many golem builders use rituals or other practices that invite spirits without understanding what they are doing. Golem societies have their ways of making sure most bodies receive life.

Free Golems

Any golem can, of course, become free. Some golem societies practice slavery of their own, but overall, most communal golems are free. Thus, communal golems are almost always free. Imitation golems are generally free as well, while vanitas golems may have substantial freedom, depending on the vanity they serve.

Many freed golems struggle with freedom. Their magic may make them compulsively obedient, but plain psychology is often to blame. Enslavement and abuse, especially by owners who do not believe golems to be intelligent, causes all kinds of mental disorders. Many golems internalize the belief that they are a slave species, develop loyalty to their controllers, are habituated to slave work, or become dependent. Most enslaved golems are born with the capacity to understand language and do labor, meaning they are inducted into slavery while their minds are still infantile. Such golems genuinely know no life besides enslavement. The legends of golems fulfilling orders well after their master’s death are true, but only rarely is it out of genuine loyalty or love. Golem communities where escapees, abandoned, or freed golems are common often dedicate significant resources to helping newly-free golems adjust.

Meatstone, Threadstone, and Silkstone

These substances are strongly associated with golems because of their value as golem materials, so much so that they are referred to collectively as golem materials. Each can be found in many colors. Meatstone is firm, malleable, and flexible, good for golem interiors. Silkstone is soft and pleasant to the touch, often used for skin. Thin layers of silkstone are translucent. When combined with meatstone, silkstone can create incredible color combinations and realistically imitate skin colors and complexions. Combined with meatstone, Threadstone is highly flexible and naturally forms in thin strands, so it is used as faux hair, fur, and so on. Golems themselves love having bodies with these materials integrated. Relying on magic for movement can make for stiffness and golems who switch from stone to meatstone will be surprised at how much easier it is to move their body, no matter how powerful the magic they are made with. Silkstone makes for greater sensitivity, and threadstone is popular aesthetically as well. Simply put, most golems feel more supple, limber, strong, and well-rounded with golem materials.

Golem materials can only form naturally in certain universes of particular physical laws, making them a luxury import in most places. Golem civilizations compete with wealthy buyers and golem builders. Many free golems struggle with buying these materials, since it means some enslaved golem might be deprived of a better construction.

Their cost assures that only the most obscenely wealthy would use them for prole golems (flaunting wealth). Instead, prole golems are generally made with whatever’s most available: clay, stone, steel, bone. Vanitas golems, since they’re unique and typically designed with aesthetics in mind, are the most likely to use these materials. Even relatively poor vanitas golem makers will sometimes obtain silkstone and threadstone (less will seek out meatstone since it’s not visible and the majority of the golem’s mass). There are even some vanitas golems made entirely out of silkstone or threadstone–this tends to make for a very weak golem though. Since domestic golems are associated with wealth already, it’s common for them to have hints of golem materials, but since domestic golems are usually used in groups, fewer people can afford to use golem materials for the entire golem. Imitation golems get these materials if they can, since golem materials allow for a more realistic appearance. Communal golems are free to use whatever they get their hands on.

A Historical Perspective on Edelgard and Political Nonviolence

Edelgard’s declaration of war is often criticized by appeals for using nonviolent methods of change. This criticism most often looks like the argument that Edelgard should’ve just talked it out with Rhea and/or Dimitri. It may also manifest as the claim that Edelgard’s cause is not urgent enough to justify violence, so only nonviolent means are permissible. Now, before we get into this, I should note that I am a prima facie pacifist for the sake of disclosure.[1]

Historical Significance of Political Nonviolence

I’m not going to say it would have been impossible for nonviolent strategies to work. Everything that follows refers to probabilities, viability, and limitations, not unconditional truths. However, the nonviolent argument is ahistorical. While the philosophy of personal nonviolence is old, the philosophy of political nonviolence is modern. Here, I refer to political nonviolence as the belief that nonviolence is an effective means to effect political change. Political nonviolence could not exist until human rights, rule of law, and (to a lesser extent) democracy had become reality. It is only because these conditions are common that we can contemplate nonviolence as a political option. As George Orwell observed:

It is difficult to see how Gandhi’s methods could be applied in a country where opponents of the regime disappear in the middle of the night and are never heard of again. Without a free press and the right of assembly, it is impossible not merely to appeal to outside opinion, but to bring a mass movement into being, or even to make your intentions known to your adversary.[2]

Freedom of speech, press, and assembly are prerequisite to the formation of a nonviolent movement. Rule of law is necessary so that violent opponents of nonviolent protesters cannot act with impunity – paramilitary groups, members of the government, and lone actors must all be held responsible or expected to be held responsible for attacks on nonviolent protesters. Democracy aids nonviolence since nonviolence relies on popular support, but is neither essential nor sufficient (after all, Socrates was democratically executed). Before these conditions existed, nonviolence was a philosophy of individual conduct – it was not considered a method to effect political change. Striking, protesting, and the like are not effective against someone who is willing to kill innocents in the name of preserving their power. (Just as Peasant Revolts were wildly unsuccessful, a Peasant Picket Line is a laughable concept.) It just is not possible to develop a serious philosophy of political nonviolence in the medieval political environment.

On the subject of monarchy, violence is nearly the only form of regime change. Since the monarch controls policy, policy change can only come by changing the monarch’s beliefs (usually only possible as an adviser) or by changing the monarch (assassination, coup, invasion, kidnapping, etc). For an outsider to change the monarch’s beliefs, the outsider must do more than convince the monarch. The outsider must overcome the (probably hostile) influence of the monarchy’s staff. The staff may be advisers, guards, bureaucrats, or messengers. Whatever their station, officials are unlikely to aid anti-establishment causes and are likely to resort to censorship or false reporting. Monarchs are powerful forces for the establishment, but are generally less effective vehicles of reform.

As a corollary, even if the monarch is sympathetic to an anti-establishment message, the monarch must change the moods of all their enforcers. That is an enormous challenge logistically, legally, and politically, even for a monarch. Monarchy is not prone to dramatic ideological change unless the people themselves are readied to make the same change.[3] The renaissances and ideological revolutions of the medieval era were organic. A monarch, or an aspiring agitator, could not have willed them into existence.

Nonviolence in Fodlan’s Political Environment

Now, let’s look at Edelgard’s options for peaceful change. First off, diplomacy with Rhea is a nonoption. Rhea is dogmatic, totalitarian, and does not recognize freedom of discourse. Rhea is the only single figure that could bring about change across Fodlan, but she is not in a position where she is willing to listen to a political opposition. Centuries of hegemony warp the mind and it is no wonder that she has a hard time taking any vision but hers seriously, for all other ideologues die without damaging her position. The other lords aren’t particularly promising either. Dimitri is highly unstable, even pre-timeskip, prone to blinding emotion during disagreements, and pro-establishment (though not radically so). His refusal to recognize that it is impossible for Edelgard to be behind the tragedy of Duscur is demonstrative. As for Claude, there is no particular advantage to diplomacy. Edelgard considers Rhea her adversary and Dimitri considers Edelgard her enemy. Claude being on Edelgard’s side would not move us closer to a Golden Route. Further, his own desire to conquer Fodlan, coupled with his manipulative and secretive nature make him a poor partner for Edelgard. In short, the personalities of Edelgard’s counterparts leave me with little trust in the diplomatic process.

It is also reasonable to suppose that Edelgard would be a nonparty to the political scene without a war. Edelgard’s rise to power was likely contingent on starting a war. Her main benefactors are House Hevring and House Bergliez, both of which benefit from a war. House Hevring’s main source of revenue is mining and its main duty is administration. Thus, their best method for accruing power is land, the primary form of wealth prior to industrialization. More land -> more mines/exploitable resources and more land -> more need for Hevring’s administrative role. Wartime also increases demand for mining (stone and ore for armor, weapons, and fortifications) and heightens their influence over domestic policy as competitors shift focus to external affairs. As for House Bergliez, they command the army. They have more power during wartime. They stand to benefit from the boost to attention and prestige. Even if they aren’t warhawks in particular, they are unlikely to oppose war on ideological grounds. We do not know Count Bergliez or Count Hevring to be idealistic in any sense (Count Hevring participated in the Insurrection of the Seven, after all). Since they do not care for Edelgard’s vision, the war remains as the biggest factor distinguishing her and PM Aegir. For his part, PM Aegir has shown no hawkish inclinations over the course of his rule. Therefore, if Hevring and Bergliez want a war, Edelgard is their only option.

Without the title of Emperor, Edelgard would have little political influence, especially in foreign affairs. Even with the title, nonviolence is especially impotent on the international scale: “Applied to foreign politics, pacifism either stops being pacifist or becomes appeasement.”[2] As a puppet or figurehead, Edelgard would have no leverage and no means beyond her own charisma. Rhea and Dimitri, her primary adversaries, are violently unstable – “the assumption, which served Gandhi so well in dealing with individuals, that all human beings are more or less approachable and will respond to a generous gesture, needs to be seriously questioned. It is not necessarily true, for example, when you are dealing with lunatics.”[2] Even without the violence, they are still dogmatic and closed off to Edelgard’s influence. This all combines to make diplomacy unviable.

Summary

Political nonviolence would be an anachronism in FETH.[4] Even in theory, it is out of place. Considering the particulars of Fodlan, the case for nonviolence gets even worse. The promise of a war was probably necessary for Edelgard to retake power in the Empire.

I’ve written this because <3 Edelgard, but also because it really is important to understand the history, limits, and nature of our ideals. This is a bit personal, but I’ve been troubled by the rise of ideologues throughout modern society and how they call dogma “idealism” or “faith to their principles.” And I think it’s something to watch out for/keep in mind.

[1] Prima facie pacifism “presumes that war is wrong but allows for exceptions [and] places the burden of proof upon the proponent of war: it is up to the proponent of war to prove, in a given circumstance, that war is in fact morally necessary” (Standord Encyclopedia of Philosophy: Pacifism).

[2] Reflections on Gandhi, George Orwell, 1949

[3] The Adrestian people seem readier to accept ideological change than the others. For one part, Adrestia seems to suffer from more extreme examples of the abuses that exist throughout Fodlan. For another, the Adrestian people have no common ideology that shores up these abuses. By contrast, Faerghus seems the least ready for change. Even though Faerghus’ culture is full of severe abuse, the Faerghus culture shores up these abuses. A normal participant of Faerghus culture (esp. the knightly ideal) is discouraged from criticizing the aristocracy, the religious ideologues, and the dogmatic cultural norms. Faerghus culture is self-preserving and shifts attention from itself: every character from Faerghus (excluding Felix and Jeralt to some degree) criticizes those around them or themselves for their suffering, not the systems, laws, and beliefs that cause suffering. This being the case, Faerghus may well resent many of Edelgard’s reforms in Crimson Flower, but reform is more likely to come by conquest than from within. Funnily enough, there is a real-life novel that would be perfect for the people of Faerghus, especially literary folk like Ingrid and Ashe: Don Quixote, or my preferred title, El Ingenioso Hidalgo Don Quijote de la Mancha (The Ingenious Gentleman Don Quixote of La Mancha). Don Quixote was written specifically as a criticism of the chivalric ideal and as a parody of chivalric novels, the same ideal that plagues Faerghus. Miguel de Cervantes’ genius would probably strike a chord with many Faerghus readers.

[4] Another anachronistic idea that I see a lot is new players’ preference for the Leicester Alliance. They see Adrestia and Faerghus and, based on the fact that monarchy is bad, decide that the Alliance is preferable. Some may even mistake the Leicester Alliance as being close-ish to democracy, which, as moderns, we are supposed to prefer in all circumstances. However, the Alliance is an aristocratic oligarchy, which is one of the worst forms of government. In fact, Plato’s Republic goes out and calls it the absolute worst form of government, out of all forms it considers. It inherits almost all the foibles of monarchy and the weaknesses of democracy: indecision, corruption, excessive concentration of power, an elite class formed by blood, etc.

[Originally written 04 May 2021 for r/Edelgard]

A Description of La Vida total

This essay is an attempt to describe a certain framework of empathy and intellectual controversy. At the center of this attempt is a short piece of prose by Gabriela Mistral: “Poemas de la madre más triste.” La Vida total, the name for this proposed framework, is a story of grief, of infinity, of joy, sight and blindness. After covering the theoretical groundwork for la Vida total, we will move to Mistral’s work and how it generates a beautiful vision for literature, in terms of praxis and implications.

1. COMPONENTS

The concept of la Vida total is not so much a novel concept as it is an extension of previous theories. Two concepts must be defined before la Vida total can be properly described: umwelt and polyphony. The first is understood according to the theory of umwelt by Jakob von Uexküll and the second by the theories of Bakhtin. We begin by discussing these terms and the relevant parts of their respective theories.

An umwelt (plural: umwelten) is “an organism’s unique sensory world” (Britannica). More complexly, Herman Weber defined it as “the totality of conditions contained in an entire complex of surroundings which permit a certain organism, by virtue of its specific organization, to survive” (qtd. in Winthrop-Young 238). Uexküll principally contrasted umwelten on the level of species: how the perceived world of a jellyfish is distinct from a human’s, a worm’s, a moss’, or a salamander’s. Many species lack sensory tools humans possess, like eyes, ears, and noses, but certain species possess senses humans do not, like some aquatic species ability to sense electric charge. The umwelt can only be constructed from sensory information; what exists outside of the senses cannot exist within the umwelt.

Species is only the first of many ways by which umwelten become differentiated. In the human case, all sorts of subjective experience alter a person’s umwelt: nation, culture, family, religion, profession, education, class, illness, genetics. As a person with PTSD perceives the world differently on account of prior sensations of trauma, their entire world, their umwelt, is changed according to the changes in perception. However, umwelten are not a deterministic model: “Nobody is the product of their milieu—each is the master of his Umwelt” (Uexküll qtd. in Winthrop-Young 216). An umwelt does not determine the choices of its singular inhabitant; an umwelt changes the choices its inhabitant can make. Not the least of these are the decisions a person makes in integrating subjective information into a coherent worldview, the decisions that go into the creation of umwelten.

We now turn to polyphony: the manyness of voices. The concept is first relevant in its typical literary sense: the authorial inclusion of many voices within a novel, including voices conflicting with the author’s, on a more or less equal footing. Polyphony, in terms of umwelten, is allowing multiple umwelten to become visible to the reader.

For the purposes of this essay, the concept of polyphony will be stretched a bit far (that polyphony, as used here, does not conform to its usual meaning is acknowledged). La Vida total is not only concerned with the confluence of voices within a novel (intratextual), but across works (intertextual). On reading an author’s oeuvre, there is polyphony. The many moods, selves, and beliefs the author inhabited across their working period produce different voices, voices which typically will not sum to a complete concept of the author. Borges reflected later in life: “I suppose my best work is over. … And yet I do not feel I have written myself out. … I no longer regard happiness as unattainable; once, long ago, I did” (“Autobiographical Essay” 260). Borges’ most studied stories often seem to communicate that belief in an unattainable happiness, yet, that belief represented a Borges that existed for a certain period of time and later ceased to be. A polyphonic perspective listens to both Borges.

One more process of polyphonizing is required. La Vida total requires polyphony to act across every text and every authorship. Everything that any human ever has, could, or will write is here viewed as a single, infinite text: The Human Text. The Human Text contains endless, unknown and unknowable voices. Each voice inhabits a unique umwelt, an umwelt which it will never share with anyone else. Nonetheless, this multitude of voices can form a single text. La Vida total is concerned with reading that text. Umwelten is la vida, polyphony is the total, which combined produce la Vida total.

2. LA VIDA TOTAL

What then, is la Vida total? La Vida total is to expand one’s umwelt to include as many umwelten as possible and live accordingly. It is an attempt to live and understand as many lives as possible within the constraints of a single life.

La Vida total is in large part a literary task; it is obsessed with the Human Text. It goes without saying that reading the full Human Text is impossible, unless the reader possesses at minimum an infinite amount of time. Many of its parts are irreversibly lost, just as many of its parts will never be written. Many authors’ texts exist in pure potentiality, prevented from ever exiting the mind: how many texts are unwritten solely because the author was illiterate and impoverished, without the resources of text creation! Although those texts cannot be read, they exist and, therefore, enter the Human Text. It is written by everyone, constantly. It contains everyone’s stories, every dead man’s untold tales. Olmec farmers, Sumerian accountants, Jainist mathematicians, Norte Chico architects, Kentucky gas station clerks, Taiwanese schoolchildren—all their contributions are coequal components.

La Vida total is, instead, the incomplete reading of the Human Text. It is a finite contemplation of an infinite literary object. Many things are hidden in the infinities of the Human Text. The Human Text is a timeless, spaceless, unchanging text composed of the deeply spatial and temporal umwelten. It encompasses humanity’s past and future, but also alternative histories that exist purely as potentials. The worlds of fiction, too, figure in the Human Text. Fiction’s polyphonic characters may correspond to real human attributes combined in an entirely possible fashion within a fictional body, unreal only in the sense that no human has yet been born with that specific expression or combination of attributes. If not, they correspond to flaws in the author’s beliefs about humanity (flaws which must be accounted for in the total concept of humanity). It seems reasonable to call whatever worldview or beliefs that result from comprehending the Human Text capital-t Truth, so la Vida total is also a search for Truth.

La Vida total is a constant accumulation of incoherent, apparently contradictory data and narratives, filtered eternally through the reader’s own sensory devices. So, this is the final key aspect: harmony. Just as the reading of the Human Text will always be incomplete, so will the interpretation and reconciliation of all that has been read. On some level, every umwelt belongs to the same world, produced by the same laws dictated by the character of this universe and its human subjects. This common genesis guarantees all these disparate umwelten, subjectivities, and expressions can be reconciled in polyphony.

Impossibility and paradox are recurring themes in la Vida total. After all, the very definition of an umwelt precludes understanding even one umwelt outside of one’s own. With respect to reading, interpretation, harmonization, and, finally, application of all that has been learned, each is an infinite task alone and an infinite task combined. There should be no pretense that living la Vida total is terminable. Instead, it is the belief that it is better to go as far as one can down this path of reading, learning, and growing, despite the fact that the end will never come.

3. AN URTEXT FOR LA VIDA TOTAL: “POEMAS DE LA MADRE MÁS TRISTE”

“Poemas de la madre más triste,” by Gabriela Mistral, is an essential expression of this framework. It is a pair of prose poems followed by a brief explanatory note. The phrase itself, “la Vida total,” is taken from the explanatory note: “tales prosas humanas tal vez sean lo único en que se canta la Vida total” (528). Gabriela Mistral “[escribió] los poemas … con intención casi religiosa” after witnessing a pregnant woman be brutally insulted by a man passing by the woman’s ranch. The first poem, “Arrojada,” deals with a pregnant woman being cast out of her home and abandoned by her family and lover (527). The second, “¿Para qué viniste?”, is the woman’s soliloquy directed at her child, in which she laments how the child would be unloved by all but her and yet, the child came to be in order to comfort her.

The act of cosuffering that prompted her to write these poems was, from the beginning, an expression of la Vida total. She states her purpose as beautifying motherhood, a state she never possessed, being childless her whole life. Yet, her poetry is that of a mother; she lives another life vicariously through her poetry. “Poemas de la madre más triste” is about the umwelten of single mothers in their full complexity: “The distress of abandonment and loneliness, the difficulties of motherhood, and the unexpected sorrow of desire are assuaged but not erased by the unconditioned love between mother and child. Gabriela acknowledges the great power of love but does not shrink from the despair and isolation that sometimes accompany maternity” (Zubizarreta 299). La Vida total, as exemplified in these poems, wrestles with the opposing forces and perspectives that occur, not just outside the individual, but within. Oppositions are allowed to coexist, not in peace per se, but without the demand that either side cease to be.

This is hardly unique to “Poemas de las madres más tristes” en Mistral’s work. As Alegria observes, her work is composed of “personal confessions, human documents instead of literary exercises” (25). He describes her poetry as “a voice too strong for the little songs that it wishes to sing. The movement is always there, a powerful, vast, rhythmic upsurge that encompasses people, landscapes, passions, hopes, bitterness, faith.” Mistral dives deep into her own life and lays it bare in her production of poetry: the “intensity of emotion which adds such force to so many of Gabriela Mistral’s poems, giving them the appearance of being wrung from the very depths of the poetess’ soul” (Preston qtd. in Zubizarreta 309). Mistral understood how la Vida total is a deep dive, not just into the souls of others, but into the umwelt of oneself.

In accordance with the polyphonic spirit, the phrase “la Vida total” is not exclusive to Mistral. José Martí too invoked it: “en la vida total han de ajustarse con gozo los elementos que en la porción actual de vida que atravesamos parecen desunidos y hostiles” (qtd. in Housková 25). Housková elaborates on Martí’s connection to la Vida total: “En la concepción de José Martí, … la armonía y la belleza surge por unión de lo contradictorio. Abarca angustia, tensión, espanto del mundo … En otro polo de la armonía tiene dimensión cósmica y dimensión íntima, unida con la ternura y la nostalgia por la infancia” (26). Mistral and Martí elaborate a vision of compassion and tenderness that makes the intellectual and emotional complexity of la Vida total survivable.

4. PRAXIS

Because almost every step of the process is infinite or otherwise impossible, la Vida total must use methods of approximation. The work of authors such as Gabriela Mistral is essential to la Vida total—la Vida total would be impossible without them. Authors perform the work of approximation simply by adding to the body of writing, but more sophisticatedly through techniques like polyphony and soul-exploration, the study of their own senses, perspectives, and emotions: the world as they can perceive it. Each additional entry provides another finite piece to incorporate into the infinite text, thus bringing the finite collection of readable texts closer to the infinite.

Beyond authorship, the matter of interpretation requires significant discussion of its own. Unlike infinite or infinity-approximating texts like Borges’ Book of Sand or “Library of Babel,” the Human Text is fully interpretable. For most of its pages, when one begins to read, they will, within a certain degree of error, understand the text. Although the Human Text spans all times and languages, it also includes all translations necessary for readers in any language to partake. A translation increases the error range of interpretation but typically will not make the error level intolerable.

Error is the key concern when approximating infinity with finitude. Oftentimes, it is impossible to know how severe the error has become. However, there is a mathematical guarantee to ensure the finite reader’s perspective approaches the infinite Vida total over time. If the reader’s perspective always trends towards expansion (so long as the knowledge gain exceeds the error growth) and there is no limit on the knowledge gain, then the perspective will approach infinite comprehension with all guarantee (this is a literary application of the monotone convergence theorem, the proper discussion of which is beyond the scope of this essay. See Bakker). In short, the two conditions are that the reader acquires more truth than error and that the reader is willing to take on all truth eventually. It could also be thought of constantly growing one’s umwelt, never letting anything remain outside it—an ever-growing bubble of perception. Given an infinite amount of time, such a perspective will become infinite. That is to say, it will comprehend la Vida total.

The first condition, ensuring knowledge gain overall exceeds knowledge loss or error, is difficult. From a finite perspective, locked within our own umwelten, it is impossible to truly know. Thomas Bernhard’s observations on truth from the author’s perspective can be inverted for the reader’s sake:

Truth, it seems to me, is known only to the person who is affected by it; and if he chooses to communicate it to others, he automatically becomes a liar. Whatever is communicated can only be falsehood and falsification; hence it is only falsehoods and falsifications that are communicated … What matters is whether we want to lie or to tell and write the truth, even though it never can be the truth and never is the truth. (qtd. in Thornton 210)

The reader cannot even be sure the author intends to write the truth. However, Bernhard’s argument provides a decanter for separating texts valuable to the seeker of la Vida total from those that are not. Texts that seek to tell the truth, and especially those that acknowledge their inability to capture the truth, are elevated. Texts that are unconcerned with truth are deemphasized. Texts that exploit, dehumanize, or devalue their subjects are condemned. As la Vida total is concerned with umwelten, such texts can only be studied to comprehend the darkened umwelt of the author, because exploitation, dehumanization, and devaluation of others cuts the reader off from the subjects’ umwelten, preventing polyphony and contemplation of la Vida total. By the same token, texts that emphasize kindness, sensitivity, and mutual understanding often (but not necessarily) serve la Vida total better than texts that do not. One more thing must be said respecting texts lacking value for la Vida total. Even though some voices must be rejected in their literal or umwelten-less interpretation and even if certain actions must be condemned unilaterally, part of la Vida total is still acknowledging the umwelten that produced these voices and actions. It is often required of the reader to reject the belief or action expressed, but understand why that belief or action came to be.

The second condition, avoiding limits on knowledge, is not so troublesome. It can largely be achieved by enjoying all good texts. La Vida total is not a framework concerned with canonicity or short-term cohesion. La Vida total requires macro and micronarratives, modernism, postmodernism, paradox, multiculturalism, literary revival, and the enfranchisement of diverse perspectives. The old canons cannot produce la Vida total, in their centering within specific historical-cultural moments. New canons can do no better; simply establishing a canon of integrated, diverse authors and cultures will quickly fall behind the growth of literature (to say nothing of how any canon will necessarily exclude works regardless of source that may benefit the particular reader in their umwelt more than the canonical texts).

The reader should not cut themselves off from the broad domains of human experience: religion, science, literature. Each offers human testimony. This is also true of media and moods. La Vida total cannot be found solely through serious philosophy or contemplation. Silly, preposterous, and casual works all form an essential and beautiful part of the Human Text (as a somewhat embarrassing but useful demonstration of this principle, this essay’s author cried to the Swedish pop song Caramelldansen because of its sublime demonstration of this point).

Silly media is not the end of the unconventional in la Vida total. Sometimes, knowingly preposterous interpretation can be profoundly valuable. Borges highlighted this in “Kafka y sus precursores.” The essay aptly begins with one of Zeno’s paradoxes of motion, which, like la Vida total, are resolved by infinite methods. Highlighting a number of Kafkaesque texts that predate Kafka, Borges observes:

si no me equivoco, las heterogéneas piezas que he enumerado se parecen a Kafka; si no me equivoco, no todas se parecen entre sí. Este último hecho es el más significativo. En cada uno de esos textos está la idiosincrasia de Kafka, … pero si Kafka no hubiera escrito, no la percibiríamos. El hecho es que cada escritor crea a sus precursores. Su labor modifica nuestra concepción del pasado, como ha de modificar el futuro. (395)

It is preposterous to read a text predating Kafka as being Kafkaesque and yet doing so can produce incredible textual and philosophical insight. Similarly, there are many occasions in which using a knowingly mismatched interpretative frame can be a valuable exercise (so long as the reader readily acknowledges that they are not interpreting the author, or even the text, but their own modification of the text).

In addition to the variety of texts, the reader should understand that a large part of la Vida total is acknowledging the validity of “enemy” or opposing beliefs and umwelten. Every reader is insufficient on their own, just as is every author. There is a certain requirement of humility; if the reader mistakenly adopts an erroneous belief during their search for la Vida total, that erroneous belief will limit their growth and keep them from la Vida total until it is corrected. This happens constantly and inevitably. Every human needs to go through that correction process.

In addition to these chiefly literary methods for pursuing la Vida total, there exist a glorious abundance of other practices that expand one’s umwelt. Of these, we highlight the neologism sonder, coined by the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows:

the realization that each random passerby is living a life as vivid and complex as your own—populated with their own ambitions, friends, routines, worries and inherited craziness—an epic story that continues invisibly around you like an anthill sprawling deep underground, with elaborate passageways to thousands of other lives that you’ll never know existed, in which you might appear only once, as an extra sipping coffee in the background, as a blur of traffic passing on the highway, as a lighted window at dusk.

La Vida total is about exploration, discovery, and the beauty of diversity. Thus, its practice is accessible to people of many philosophies, religion, disciplines, and walks of life. The practitioner cannot do it all, like so many other parts of la Vida total. Diversifying the methods and disciplines employed for the expansion of umwelten should prove fruitful.

5. CONCLUSION

Unsurprisingly, the discussion of la Vida total cannot be completed. Like any stopping point in an infinite process, what is included and what is excluded is a matter of practicality. However, some final comments should be valuable.

La Vida total is an aesthetic of beauty, built from human difference and conflict. Interest in la Vida total is often attached to suffering. Gabriela Mistral employed la Vida total against the dehumanization of mothers in “Poemas de la madre más triste.” Her work elsewhere represents a struggle with powerful, internal pain or troubling outside forces; Wretmark identifies each of “Poema del Hijo,” “Meciendo,” “El niño solo,” “Poemas de las madres tristes,” and “Poemas de las madres más tristes” as possible expressions of her struggle with childlessness (35-36). José Martí died a martyr in order not to die of illness in Cuba’s war for independence, a war that ultimately subjugated Cuba to other foreign powers and set the foundation for the Castro dictatorship. This essay’s author has turned to la Vida total in response to the study of the true nature of genocide and the despair that comes from being unable to save or support anyone involved: the mad from their madness, the victim from their captor.

An objective model of reality cannot be correct unless it fully explains every subjective reality, every umwelten. Enough umwelten are pierced through with profound bitterness, pain, and suffering. The innocent, carefree child is part of it. So is the child soldier. La Vida total subjects its devotee to contemplation of pure pain and evil, which must be reconciled with the purest love and joy. It is an attempt to deal with the world as it is and, seeing truly, understand what to make of life.

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Borges, Jorge Luis. “An Autobiographical Essay.” The Aleph and other stories, 1933-1969, E.P. Dutton, 1970, pp. 203-259.

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Edelgard as an Empath

I want to emphasize one of Edelgard’s motivations. The discussion often arises as to why she started a war instead of opting for a slower approach towards reform, like Claude (although him starting a war later certainly was a possibility). Edelgard’s urgency is often attributed to her shortened lifespan. After all, Lysithea specifically cites her shortened lifespan as a huge driver. While that is important, she is also powerfully and explicitly motivated by empathy: the desire that no one should suffer as she has.

Edelgard is an empath, someone who instinctively feels through empathy (rather than empathy being a chosen or deliberate mode of feeling). Empathy allows her to reciprocate kindness, softness, and intimacy easily. Unlike many depictions of empathy, however, we also get the other side. Empathy, exposed to trauma and suffering, produces rage and profound pain. Edelgard has suffered a great deal on her own account, but she also carries the suffering of those around her. Even as her own torture fades into the past, she is constantly exposed to new sources of pain. Conversely, no one, except CF Byleth, connects her with benign sources of empathetic emotion.

For some elaboration, human development studies identify a class of child like Edelgard, sometimes called “orchid children.” Most children can do ok in a wide variety of circumstances. They may not thrive without special nurture, but they will be ok. Orchid children are defined by the fact that they are highly sensitive. This elevated sensitivity gives them orchid-like characteristics. If they are nurtured carefully, they are able to become brilliant, kind, and genuinely unusual. However, if they are not deliberately nurtured, they wither. Sensitive children, often empaths, hurt much more from the absence of nurture. They have incredible difficulty becoming well-adjusted or overcoming trauma. It goes without saying that Edelgard has not been well-nurtured and we see that. Until she receives nurture, she is almost unable to express her true emotions and intentions, ask for help or support, or trust others.

Edelgard is proximate to the suffering that the Church, aristocracy, and TWS cause, having lost much of herself and her loved ones to them. Proximity is an important concept in all humanitarian efforts, but it impacts empaths more extremely. Edelgard knows that the longer she waits, the longer these organizations continue to victimize innocents and the further away her wish to end such things moves. The longer she waits, the more tempting her own privilege to ignore continued oppression becomes. (Quoting Edge of Dawn: “As I live out / Each peaceful day / Deep in my soul / Oh, I know I can’t stay” and “Open the door / And walk away / Never give in / To the call of yesterday”). Even if human suffering weren’t reinforced by her direct experiences, she would know empathetically know that the form of suffering she endured continues.

In particular, we have Edelgard, Lysithea, Annette, Dedue, Monika, and Tomas as direct victims of TWS, Ashe’s family and Hapi as direct victims of the Church, and Felix, Ingrid, Dorothea, Miklan, Mercedes, Jeritza, and Raphael as direct victims of the aristocracy. That so many people from the Officers Academy are victims speaks volumes about how much oppression must necessarily affect the poor classes. We see only a sliver, but we know that the body count is increasingly rapidly.

Every year Edelgard delays, she knows there are more children whose hair is bleached white. More families are broken. Edelgard is an empathetic character: she absorbs the suffering of those around her. It can make her soft and kind, if she has the right support, but to experience so much pain, to be conscious of ongoing evil, also makes one hard. Empathy, without positive contributions, in a world full of cruelty and suffering, is genuine torture. It has been observed in sociology that intense empathy can produce decision paralysis in some cases or, in others, such intense emotional identification with one party that the empath stops sensing the emotion of another group, usually due to rage.

I have focused on empathy as it works on her decision to declare war, but it operates throughout her character. Before I sign off, consider how she insists on equality in the house, how she mothers her peers, her emotional struggles in routes besides CF, why her relationship with Hubert doesn’t stabilize her, and, of course, her whole relationship with Byleth.

[Originally written 14 Feb 2020 for r/Edelgard]

Umwelt

An umwelt (plural: umwelten) is a given creature’s world. The creature creates their own umwelt as they learn about the outside world through their perception. The outside world is, for its part, called the umgebung.

A creature cannot learn about the umgebung without its senses. We have no other way to gain knowledge. This forces us to consider the strengths of and weaknesses of our ability to perceive. Everything we consider true about the world is dependent on the accuracy of our observations. Look around you. Your mental concept of walls and floors is probably smooth, by convenience. But walls usually aren’t that smooth at all, even though they’re more or less flat. Your umwelt does not contain the texture of the floor until you specifically observe it and incorporate it into your worldview. When you walk past a brick building, is every single brick part of your umwelt? No, you have not observed the bricks individually, but only as a whole.

These examples are usually inconsequential, but contemplate how varied human perception is. Every person represents a unique idea, an emotional framework built on experiences filtered through perception. Physical disabilities all immediately impact umwelten, but so does a kind upbringing or a cruel mentorship. Mental illness, physical illness, trauma, kindness, changes in how big or small the world seems, pure knowledge: they all can and will change a person’s umwelt forever.

You have your own umwelt. For myself, I believe most, maybe all, people should be treated with kindness and that kindness exists on some level in all people, if they should choose to access it. I want to believe that one can generally trust another. What would it take for a child soldier to believe the same things? If they had seen their kind (or cruel) parents killed, if they had been tortured until they became willing to kill, and the very act of survival turned them into the things they hated most? When that same child miraculously survives and grows up, only to become a war criminal because they could not escape that lifestyle or adapted to it too successfully? Or a young person from a rural family, promised work in a safer, more stable place, who arrive in a strange land only to be kidnapped by those who were supposed to be their provider? When they are drugged, never hearing any speech in a language they understand, beaten and abused as chattel? If we do not contemplate the natural beliefs of people in such dire circumstances, we cannot hope to understand our fellow people.

In corollary, there are also the umwelten of people like Nadia Murad, humans rights activists who are themselves victims, or Maria Gaetana Agnesi, a Catholic polymath raised in an unusually liberal climate who ignored her appointment by the Pope as the second female university professor ever to teach children and take care of the sick.

Moving past the individual, umwelten also form across species. Jakob von Uexküll, the creator of the umwelt concept, was fascinated with the umwelten of creatures like ticks and jellyfish, both of which are blind. Consider how the world you believe in would be different, had you been 1. born blind, 2. became blind after learning to see, and 3. the whole human race was blind and had never learned of such a thing as seeing. Variances in the individual umwelten are only further complicated because these variances are determined within the boundaries determined by the circumstances of our birth: species, upbringing, civilization, culture, nationality, technology, race, gender. Our experiences infuse meaning into our world that we will never be able to communicate to someone without the same experiences.

Before we even arrive at questions of language, word choice, and empathy, perfect communication is already impossible, because we cannot perceive the experiences that give meaning to words. Even when we are coparticipants or observers of a relevant experience, we have not perceived the experience as the umwelt creator did. We cannot know what they focus on, what memories they use to infuse meaning into their current experience. This means that concepts like consent and agreement, so essential for our coexistence, are only ever partial. Why do lawyers draft hundred-page contracts? Because the contracting parties have no way of knowing how much their umwelten have in common. They only have belief: beliefs about the deal they believe they are making and beliefs about what the deal they think the other party thinks they are making. When two umwelten interact, we have a semiosphere, whether we are contracting, reading this essay, or trying to be understand someone else.

Many social problems begin with the problems of forming a good semiosphere. These problems, however, are all external. A similar, but possibly greater problem, is that of the innenwelt. The innenwelt is the you that you create within your umwelt. You cannot learn anything about yourself, save what you perceive. However, there is no bound on the number of filters between the you who puts information out and the you who perceives that information. When you contemplate your own mind, you create separate selves to act and perceive. You do not perceive yourself as part of the umgebung, as you may a brick or insect. You only perceive what you yourself present. When you present information to another, if you try to learn about yourself through that information, you must wait until it passes through the other person’s umwelt and then comes back however they present it. Many of the difficulties of life amount to difficulties in forming an innenwelt. Endless stories have been written for characters who fail to form their innenwelt. Are Borges’ stories anything but his characters’ innenwelten falling apart or manifesting, in turn representing Borges’ pursuit of his own innenwelt? Even the sciences, contemplation of the umgebung, stem from the pursuit of the innenwelt: creating the self by recreating the universe (of which the self is part) within the mind.

Takeaway

Lest this be mistaken for idle philosophy, I would like to say a few things. As you become more aware of your own umwelt and the umwelten of all other life, you necessarily learn things that should change who you are. You must be conscious of your own fragility, as a weak body of flesh vulnerable to all manner of disease and injury, but also as a mind. It is a fact that a sizable percentage of what you believe is false. However, you will never know how much is false or in which way you’re wrong. You cannot know, in truth and in spirit, whether your errors are fundamental or nuanced. You do not know whether another person knows a thing, you may only believe. No matter how objectively wrong someone may be within the umgebung, they may be speak pure truth within their umwelt.

First, be understanding. It doesn’t matter if it’s a disagreement, a misunderstanding, an argument, or whatever. You do not know the condition of another’s umwelt and innenwelt (or even, really, the condition of your own). What they believe may not be True, but it is true enough for them, as they currently are.

Second, be gentle. That truth, no matter how robust or weak, is the sum of a life of learning through pain and hope, curiosity, success and disappointment. Do not force another person’s umwelt to become yours. Let them form it themselves, while providing compelling evidence that they are loved.

Third, be kind. The more I contemplate the umwelten, the more I am terrified. People hurt a lot under all circumstances. Do not add to their suffering. It may be incredibly difficult for you to beautify or love your own umwelt, but you can make things better through goodness to others.

In particular, encourage the kind, the gentle, the pure, the childlike, whose umwelten are precious and beautiful above all others. Such are often discouraged as naive, immature, or idealistic. The answer is to help them to become harmless as doves, cunning as serpents, not to turn their kindness against them. Contemplating the umwelten of such people is a pure blessing, So, I repeat what I said and end: encourage the kind, the gentle, the pure, the childlike, whose umwelten are precious and beautiful above all others.

See also

Wikipedia

Flip Flappers, reading about this anime introduced me to the umwelt concept.

Sonder, an exercise or experience in which you contemplate the umwelten of those around you. Bringing people into your umwelt as individuals, instead of as components of a collective image.

Neuroscience Readies for a Showdown Over Consciousness Ideas, an article by Quanta Magazine featuring Integrated Information Theory, a related theory of conscious I find very exciting.

The Guilty, a film that implements this concept well without invoking it. An excellent example of sympathetic storytelling.